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Monday, 10 August 2020

Writing Week 1

Hello people, today I'm going to show you my writing that I did in week one. So here's what I did.

  Hansel and Gretel

The forest looked like nightmare fuel. The boys were slowly and carefully walking in the frozen fog that felt like they weighed an extra two kg's. As it felt like they were going in circles until they sensed a smell, a candy smell. It smells like a gingerbread house. 


They quickly zipped to where the smell was coming from. They eventually got to where the smell was coming from. It was a gingerbread house! They thought it looked so yummy and they were so hungry that they thought they could have a little nibble. A nibble turned into a crum, a door, a wall, two walls and then the whole house was gone. They ate the whole house!

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