Puppy
Playful, Cheeky
Hunting, Biting, Cuddling
Mischief, Treats, Toys, Pats
Barking, Sleeping, Playing
Naughty, Confusing, Funny
Dog
Fluffy cuddly dog
Loves walking and playing fetch
Phoenix is a dog
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Hi Maxwell
ReplyDeleteWell done with your poem. As soon as I opened your post it caught my eye. I love dogs and have five of them. Is Phoenix your dog?
Steve