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Tuesday, 26 November 2019

formal letter 4

MightyMax@
370 innes rd
Christ Church
MightyMax@gmail.com 

18 November 2019

Dear Teacher
I am writing to you to inform you that I think we should have swings because it’s enjoyable. If you think it’s unsafe that's ok because the normal seats will have a seat belt and there will be a  baby seat for 3 4’s and under.

It would be easy to build, just some bars and with chains with rubber over top of it so it won’t hurt people’s hands. There should be 6 swings so it’s not too crowded. It should be further than the other playground equipment so that when they swing it won’t hit people and there will be a place that you will line up on so you also do not get hit.

Sincerely Max

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